Write Better Messaging
The Surprisingly Simple Formula That Can Help You Write Better Marketing Messages

If you’ve ever sat down to write a marketing email, a social media caption, or even the headline on your website and thought, “What am I even trying to say here?” You’re not alone.
One of the most helpful tools I’ve found for creating clear, compelling messaging isn’t a trendy template or AI hack. It’s a formula. Yep. A real, nerdy, math-looking formula. But stick with me because it’s actually brilliant.
It’s called the MECLABS Conversion Formula, and it goes like this:
C = 4m + 3v + 2(i–f) – 2a
Let’s break it down and talk about why it’s useful, especially if you’re a small business trying to speak to real humans and get them to take action.
Why This Formula Matters (Even If You Hate Math)
This isn’t about actual math. You’re not solving for X. You’re using a framework to understand what motivates someone to take action – and what might be getting in the way.
That action might be:
- Buying something from your store
- Booking a service
- Signing up for your newsletter
- Donating to your cause
- Or even just clicking a link
Whatever you’re trying to get someone to do, this formula gives you a checklist to think through before you write your next headline or call to action.
Breaking Down the Formula (No Jargon, Promise)
C = 4m + 3v + 2(i–f) – 2a
(where C = the Conversion)
M = Motivation (multiplied by 4)
This is the most important factor. What’s going on in your customer’s head when they land on your page or see your ad?
- Why are they here?
- What are they hoping to fix, solve, or get help with?
- Are they just browsing, or ready to make a decision?
You can’t always control their motivation, but you can write in a way that speaks to it. Meet them where they are.
V = Value Proposition (multiplied by 3)
Why should someone choose you over someone else?
This is where you define your “only factor” – the thing that makes your offer both appealing and clear.
Ask yourself:
- Is it obvious what you’re offering?
- Can your customer get this anywhere else?
- Do they believe you?
- Do they want it?
I = Incentive
Incentives sweeten the deal. This could be a discount, a bonus, a limited-time offer, or just a really great experience. It does not always have to be about money! It helps tip the scale when a customer is hesitating.
F = Friction
This is anything that slows someone down. Confusing navigation. Long forms. Unclear instructions. Too many clicks. Anything that makes the process annoying or harder than it needs to be.
The goal: make it easy to say yes.
A = Anxiety
This is the silent killer of conversions.
- Is this a scam?
- Will the product be worth the price?
- What if I don’t like it?
- Will it even work for me?
Reduce anxiety by adding trust signals: customer reviews, clear return policies, secure checkout labels, or anything that helps someone feel safe moving forward. If you can, address at least two common anxieties your customers might face before they purchase.
What This Looks Like in Real Life: A Thrift Store Example
Let’s say you run a local thrift store in a small tourist town and you want more people to shop in-store.
Here’s how you could use the MECLABS formula to guide your messaging:
C = Conversion Goal
You want visitors to walk in and check out your shop.
M = Motivation
They’re on vacation, exploring town, looking for something fun or unique. They love a good deal or want something they can’t find at home.
V = Value Proposition
We’re the only place in town where you can find vintage clothes, retro décor, and quirky treasures from McCall’s past – all under one roof.
I = Incentive
Bring this Instagram post to the counter and get 10% off your first find.” You could also highlight a seasonal special – buy two accessories get one half price, etc.
F = Friction
Make sure your hours, address, and parking info are easy to find. Add a big friendly sign out front. Keep the store clean and easy to browse.
A = Anxiety
Add a sign that says “All sales final, but we triple check items for quality so you won’t be surprised.” PLUS…highlight a few great reviews from past customers – social proof is super powerful!
This formula doesn’t just help you “write better copy” – it helps you think more clearly about how people make decisions.
And that kind of clarity? That’s marketing gold.
Even better…it’s something you can use again and again. Whether you’re writing a social media caption, designing a flyer, or building a homepage.
Because when you understand what makes people say yes, you can stop guessing – and start connecting.
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